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Post  _XxCommanderxX_ on Fri Oct 28, 2011 10:34 am

Any Advice on this?

Tavern Exterior



Interior



Cellar


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Post  Sharnan on Fri Oct 28, 2011 1:38 pm

Quite impressive, Duke Commander.

In regards to your first image, consider the weight of materials. You may well notice that where the walls of upper levels of buildings are walled with wood or plaster, the walls of lower stories are often made of stone or brick. This is because stone products are normally heavier and sturdier than wood products; an upper level needs to be light, whereas a lower level needs to be strong. Having the layer of stone throws this balance out. This is just a suggestion to add superficial realism and is certainly not a rule. However, I do suggest that you replace the stone with something lighter than wood, rather than something heavier than wood.

In regards to your first image, what lets it down is the counter area. Consider adding some supports over the top of the counter, perhaps planks or fences, or something similar; this would also prevent unwanted patrons from jumping the counter. Consider also what is behind the counter. Create some shelving on which things like bottles and mugs may be found. I do not quite understand why the chests are built into the floor. This looks very peculiar to me.

As it is, I can barely fault your wine cellar. It is a little too bright to feel like a cellar, but other than that, everything you have built is of commendable quality. Please let me know if you require elaboration or extra feedback.
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Post  _XxCommanderxX_ on Fri Oct 28, 2011 2:59 pm

Thanks Emperor, going to improve it and start on more of the buildings you mentioned.

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Post  B_rank on Sat Oct 29, 2011 5:28 am

Looks great Smile

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Post  _XxCommanderxX_ on Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:39 am

Gallows

Hang Liamod here.. no?

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Post  Treijim on Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:14 am

a trapdoor or piston opening underneath it would go well Very Happy
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Post  __OMG__ on Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:58 am

Treijim wrote:a trapdoor or piston opening underneath it would go well Very Happy
Then it wouldn't be a gallow if they released them and i ate them from below Very Happy


Also!!
I made an idea for crop layouts if your interested.
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Look reallg good

Post  OKDOK. on Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:02 am

That looks good perfect for hanging laimod as Commander said

ohh and one other thing is are eony of you able to access minecraft its self?
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Post  Treijim on Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:10 am

the logging in function seems to be broken. those who are already logged in can play it just fine.
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Ok

Post  OKDOK. on Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:16 am

are you able to log in
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Post  Treijim on Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:18 am

nope. theres only four people on the server until minecraft is fixed.
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Second photo

Post  OKDOK on Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:30 am

Umm im not sure from the texture pack but is that wool in the second image on the ground as you enter the building?

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