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Competition #2 Form

Post  Sharnan on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:38 pm

FILL THIS OUT ON THE 20TH OR 21ST OF JULY.

POST YOUR FORM AS A REPLY TO THIS TOPIC.

ONLY FORMS FILLED OUT AND POSTED HERE BEFORE THE 22ND OF JULY ARE GUARANTEED AN INSPECTION.


Username:

You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke:

Delete the categories that you are not entering. You can NOT enter more than TWO categories.

1. City category.

Name of city to enter:
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):

Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it):
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials):
Describe your city or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the city or points of interest:

2. Name of Town to enter:

Name of town to enter:
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):

Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it):
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials):
Describe your town or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the town or points of interest:

3. Location of District to enter:

Name of town or city that contains district:
Location of district within town:
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):

Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it):
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials):
Describe your district or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the district or points of interest:

4. Location of Structure to enter:

Name of town or city that contains district:
Location and name of structure:
Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it):
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials):
Describe your structure or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the structure or points of interest:

Do you want feedback/advice written up?: YES/NO

Notes
To calculate region size, type /region info nameofyourtown
You should see something like this at the bottom: Bounds: (xx,0,xxx) (yy,127,yyy). Subtract xx from yy, or whichever is highest, and subtract xxx from yyy, or whichever is highest. You should get two numbers which are the width and length of your town’s region.

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Re: Competition #2 Form

Post  Sharnan on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:38 pm

This is an example to give you an idea of how the things you fill out affect the feedback and results:

Username: Sharnan

You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke: Emperor

Delete the categories that you are not entering. You can NOT enter more than TWO categories.

1. City category.

Name of city to enter: Orelus
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):
  1. Saint Thomas’ Cathedral
  2. Decrepit Library
  3. Grace of Lord Renin
  4. Beryl Castle
  5. That little furnished shack next to the spawn building

Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 7
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 2
Describe your city or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the city or points of interest: The whole land used to be a smelly swamp, so I spent months terraforming the entire terrain to make it suitable for construction. It also used to have a village where the bank is now. I kept the basements and mines of the village in honour of their unwanted presence. Note how everything lines up to the four roads so the city is divided into distinct districts and areas. Plz mark my city well!!!!11eleven

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Re: Competition #2 Form

Post  Sharnan on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:39 pm

Results/Feedback Form (abbreviated for brevity, and these are NOT my actual thoughts concerning Orelus!)

City judged: Orelus

Paths and lighting: The use of four main roads makes the town easy to navigate, given its immense size. Lighting is fairly thorough, though a little boring in places. The dynamic lighting outside the arena is an amusing touch. 7/10

Overall layout: Cleanly divided into distinct areas, though perhaps a little too cleanly. It lacks cohesion and a sense of unity, though it’s so large that it’s difficult to actually notice. 7/10

Architectural style: Very inconsistent, though many of the styles are interesting. Of particular noteworthiness is the Edgard District. 6/10

Stair/Step test: Passed! 10/10

  1. Saint Thomas’ Cathedral: Overall very impressive. The eastern wing is empty, and the western wing seems rushed on the inside, but the feel of the main hall is overwhelmingly good! 10/10
  2. Decrepit Library: Very dark and rundown, and I cannot actually find a way inside. Looking through the wooden beams, it seems to be a decrepit library, but it also seems unfinished. 6/9
  3. Grace of Lord Renin: A glorious vessel. It seems a little bit short and fat, but this is acceptable, as different ships are different shapes. The upper deck of the stern is completely empty, and the rear upper deck is somewhat plain, but the rest is detailed and interesting. 7/8
  4. Beryl Castle: Though quite simple, its organic layout and practical positioning of rooms grant it an appealing air. Clearly some thought has gone into several of the rooms. The banners are a good final touch. 6/7
  5. That little furnished shack next to the spawn building: It is indeed a little furnished shack next to the spawn building, but it is nothing more. I found it quite underwhelming. 2/6


Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 7
[I will run your numbers by Treijim to see if he feels they are accurate. If you score yourself highly, you may lose points, but if you score low and Treijim thinks you scored too low, you will lose more points, so please be honest]
I am disappointed that you acquired so much help, but given the sheer scale and amount of detail involved, it is also understandable to get so much help. Therefore, only a few points will be lost, due to the necessity and honesty of your response. 7/10

Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 1
[We have charts of everything you have ever purchased, so please do not lie! I admire those who gather their own materials, but I also understand the need to use shops]
It is very impressive that you bought so little materials, considering how many blocks were used! Oh, wait. You used Creative mode. How deceiving. 2/10

FINAL SCORE for ORELUS: 70/100

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Re: Competition #2 Form

Post  edge_raider on Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:47 am

Username: edge_raider

You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke: mayor

Delete the categories that you are not entering. You can NOT enter more than TWO categories.

4. Location of Structure to enter: redhill. you cant miss it

Name of town or city that contains district: redhill
Location and name of structure: sun and moon tower. its in redhill
Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 0
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 0
Describe your structure or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the structure or points of interest: its the tallest building on the map. the space under it was going to be a crypt hall with 60 unique statues but were changing worlds so i cant finish it. so only look at the top. it all lines up with the water channels in the town. you can climb up the top and drop down the middle. its the longest drop in the world. the towers took a day each to build. i tried to make them look like old medieval cathedral towers.

Do you want feedback/advice written up?: yeah

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Re: Competition #2 Form

Post  Conez7 on Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:31 am

Username: Conez7

You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke: Duke

Delete the categories that you are not entering. You can NOT enter more than TWO categories.

1. City category.

Name of city to enter: Windhelm
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):

-Bath house
-Windhelm Palace
-Windhelm Stronghold
-Windhelm Baracks
-Supply Ship

Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 4
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 5
Describe your city or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the city or points of interest:

I guess the main point of the city is to be fairly broad in terms of purpose. There is a farming district which has within it a small forestry area and lumber mil. There is also a small mining district and a fishing boat/ market area. I also wanted it to seem there was a high population number, but dont have much more time to build the other structures i wanted (eg. arena, more housing, shops...)



3. Location of District to enter: East end of Windhelm (Farming)

Name of town or city that contains district: Windhelm
Location of district within town: (3. Location of District to enter:)
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):

-Windmill
-Lumber mil

Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 0
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 1


you want feedback/advice written up?: YES

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Re: Competition #2 Form

Post  __OMG__ on Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:55 am

Username:__OMG__

You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke:Mayor

4. Location of Structure to enter:

Name of town or city that contains district: Tor'Kavaan
Location and name of structure:The castle and tower in the center.
Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 2
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 9.8
Describe your structure or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the structure or points of interest:I built the castle for military purposes, I made the part closer to the warp to contain the mess hall, sleeping quarters, etc. and the far one for the higher ranking officials to make plans and meetings or whatever.

Do you want feedback/advice written up?: Yesssssssss

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Re: Competition #2 Form

Post  Plasmadevilha on Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:03 am

Username: Plasmadevilha

You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke: Mayor

Delete the categories that you are not entering. You can NOT enter more than TWO categories.

1. Town category.
2. Best District category
Name of city to enter: Falcon's reach
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):

1. Castle
2. Gate House
3. Library
4. Church
5. Black Smith

Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 4-5
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 5-6
Describe your city or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the Town or points of interest:
My Town started off a small region to the empire but quickly grew. The wall was one of the most time comsuming build ive ever used. The Garrison at the NE side of Falcons Reach was constructed to hold the walls from any seiges since that part of the wall was the most vulnerable. Before the Garrison was constructed many outlaws attacked from that side of the town, Once the garrison was built the outlaws were shot down before they made it too the wall. I built the mines outside of the walls so the shafts weren't disturbing the surface. The Undercrofts were built to store dead bodies (Outlaws) under the chapel on the castle in the catacombs below. Apart from the castle the gate house is the strongest and most secure part of my wall. The god that people of falcons reach worship is elrath, The dragon-god of light. Elrath's Messagers are the angels.

3. Location of District to enter: East of the statue on the main road (Center of town)

Name of town or city that contains district: Falcons Reach
Location of district within town: East of the statue on the main road (Center of town)
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):


Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 1
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 2-3
Describe your district or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the district or points of interest: It is the safest place in my town because of the walls surrounding it. The barracks inside holds weapons and armor to hold off enemies and the tower ontop of the barracks is used for a crows nest. The district mostly focuses on wealth and religon. Only the enlightened may own a home and the soldiers in the barracks fight for elrath's blessings.

Do i want feedback: Yes Please


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Re: Competition #2 Form

Post  claytonmil1997 on Thu Jul 19, 2012 1:09 pm

Username: Claytonmil1997

You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke: Baron

Delete the categories that you are not entering. You can NOT enter more than TWO categories.

1. town category
2.best structure

Name of city to enter: Zerehemla. name of structure: Terrowin
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst): Barracks, university, library, the maid of scur, fortress (on top of the hill to the north).

Degree of admin help for zerehemla (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 3 (not including the ocean)

Degree of admin help for Terrowin (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 0 (not including the ocean)

Items bought from shops for Terrowin: 10

Items bought from shops for Zerehemla (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 8

Describe your city or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the city or points of interest:

Zerehemla:
My town is very academic with the library and university. to train alchemists such as teddy and myself trained by my father Arthroudok.

the dock is built for a lot of merchant, transport, war and fishing ships. the dock also caters for all of these kinds of things with the tavern the red pony or soldiers or people.

Terrowin:
terrowin if heavily fortified and can withstand a siege with only 3 decent people defending it. its walkways and defensive tactics also help with its deftness along with the 243 suits of armor for the soldiers. i would say it is one of my best builds along with its practical and working defenses. the only thing i regret is the location because you can build a trebuchet almost anywhere around it.

do i want feedback: yes pleas


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Post  _XxCommanderxX_ on Sat Jul 21, 2012 10:10 am

Username: _XxCommanderxX_
You are the Mayor/Baron/Duke: Duke

1. City category.

Name of city to enter: Illium
Region:168x404
Specific structures/buildings to judge (list up to five, in order from best to worst):
-Illium Castle
-Illium Barracks
-Blacksmith (Stone house across from barracks)
-Fighters Guild (Large house, south-west corner of city)
-Assembly Shrine (Circular stone structure, north-western corner of city)


Degree of admin help (WorldEdit, moving, clearing, etc. 0=no help, 10=Treijim built it): 4
Items bought from shops (0=no materials, 10=all materials): 8
Describe your city or make other notes here, such as the purpose of the city or points of interest:

Illium was created when the empire first settled Temenea and was one of the earliest towns. Created as a fortified town in unknown lands, it has since been transformed into a magnificent city. The city is militarised with many trading aspects. The large barracks and smithy serve as a production of warriors and fine equipment, strengthening Illium as a military asset. The castle is now perched high above the rest of the city and is a main highlight. The main road runs in a straight line all the way through the city, leading you through 3 distinct districts/areas. The Assembly Shrine doubles as a town assembly in peacetimes and a war assembly when at war. It is primarily used for oaths/promises before battle, especially to other fallen soldiers.

Do you want feedback written up?: Yes

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